Nice layout!!! I like how the frame and the word-art "SHAWN" look and I also like the journaling. What I like the most is how the layout has a "balance" feeling. Great Job!
I would make the tag a little smaller so that it does not becomeas a distraction from the main focus -the photo (or overshadows the photo). I would also add a little thumb, a ribbon or a bow to show how the tag is attached to the photo an it does not look like if it is just "floating" and I would move it up or down.. not on the middle.